I proofed the most recent changes to my young adult novel Foreverness today (I took a break from working on the sequel to The Amber Wizard last week to do the revision) and sent the revised manuscript off to my agent. He'd read it recently and had asked for a number of changes. None of them were substantive, but they helped to clarify a number of plot points and create some more emotional resonance between the main characters. Matt is a great guy for cutting right to the heart of a piece of fiction and figuring out exactly what works and what needs some help. I will let you know what he thinks of the revision when I hear from him in the next few weeks.