tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-11403226.post111152917869170767..comments2023-07-03T05:19:40.765-05:00Comments on A Writer's Journal: More on cover artDavid Forbeshttp://www.blogger.com/profile/02545973293679502714noreply@blogger.comBlogger2125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-11403226.post-1111865529036403702005-03-26T14:32:00.000-05:002005-03-26T14:32:00.000-05:00At 5 past Tuesdaycelebral lunaticstalking of relev...At 5 past Tuesday<BR/>celebral lunatics<BR/>talking of relevance<BR/>on the art boards in cyberspace<BR/>gather sound,<BR/>claiming to make the patterns of exchange<BR/>they create<BR/>into a number of truths<BR/>which frame a commitment <BR/>to concrete expression<BR/>by anchoring sense in earth bound images<BR/>within the context of modernity<BR/><BR/> I listen<BR/> transfixed<BR/> hypnotised <BR/><BR/> by the weight of voices<BR/><BR/> and <BR/> test a theory <BR/>of how<BR/> to picture<BR/> meaning<BR/><BR/> by measuring <BR/>the relative <BR/>length <BR/>of each syllable<BR/><BR/> with its syntatic sense <BR/> and<BR/> the<BR/> degree<BR/> of assonance<BR/> cossanance<BR/> and<BR/> alliterative value<BR/> when<BR/> spoke<BR/> to<BR/> life<BR/> by<BR/> a<BR/> poet’s breathCoirí Filíochtahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15137576329670368944noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-11403226.post-1111635519060276622005-03-23T22:38:00.000-05:002005-03-23T22:38:00.000-05:00Nice description and powerful imagery. I think it ...Nice description and powerful imagery. I think it would make an awesome cover, but the publisher might feel it was too strong or doom-laden. Depends what the marketing people say ;-)<BR/><BR/>A very minor nit, but just in case it isn't picked up later; "the emtpy trays left" should be 'empty'<BR/><BR/>(You can tell I've been proofing for about 2 weeks. They still leap out at me!)Simon Hayneshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02660767551431793439noreply@blogger.com